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I helped an elder while you were asking for miracles.

I was someone's happiness when you were praying.

Tell God that next time you talk with Him.
Today was a windy day. When I was exiting my university, I saw this old man (whose bike was on a side of the street) desperatedly picking up some (like 50 o 70) pamphlets which were all spread over the floor. And the wind! So I went and helped him. Then other two people came to help him too. and he was so grateful! he wished me luck with my studies and all. and he explained several times that the papers fell from the basket in his bike because of a rock in the way.

Well, we finished picking everthing, I wished a good day to the man, he too (plus luck in the sutdies) and left. Oh, the pamphlets were about a centre for abandoned pets. So the guy was a good guy! So well, we parted ways. Me felling so good for having helped.

I walked half a block and crossed a church where I saw this woman praying....and I thought, "ha, you were there, secluded and all, and I was out here, living my life and helping a good guy". so well, this's been in my mind for a time....so here is the result....tell your god I said hi :D

EDIT: I'm so very glad so many people liked this one ;D I was a bit afraid as this has some religious stuff....but well, very happy this got popular, so thank you to everyone ;D
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moonfaeryprincess Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2010
yeah! *cheers* go out and DO instead of sitting and THINKING about it
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
THANKS! YEAH! I'M DOING ;D you do too, let's make a better world together!
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moonfaeryprincess Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
ok, seriously, you should submit that to Manga Catchphrases Inc
LOL!
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2010
because it's such an original phrase ;D
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brigit-aisle Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010
You know, I sometimes think about that too.
I'm neither religios and stuff nor an exactly active person. But when it comes to times people make me think who the hell is the better from us.

Once when our last lesson was cancelled, I couldn't go straight home (shitty bus only comes every 1-1,5 hours D:< ) so I decided to stay at the bookstore.
When I finally decided to make my way to the bus stop I saw an old lady with two dogs and a lot of bags.
She seemed to have a little trouble of coordinating all that stuff in her hands, so I finally took my courage and ask her if she wants help.

The people around... stared.

It turned out that I would walk her and the dogs the whole way down to her home.
I wished her good luck for the future and she even gave me some money (that in the end I couldn't help but take, oh I'm still such a bad person. but it's not like I didn't try to fight ot D: )
and , because I got totally lost, asked her the way to my bus stop.
And you know what? It was almost just down the street.
I feel good when I help people. I don't know if this might also be a little egoistic, but honestly I don't exactly care either.
I think what matters in the end is that this lady got home safely.
And I worked for that.
And I didn't even need to believe in jesus for that.
So tell me now, am I a good or a bad person?
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2010
Well, I believe in not making comparisons....but sometimes it /is/ imposible not to notice the difference in worthiness XD

haha, what a devil! you took the money! haha, nah, I think that was only fair! hey, the banks dont accept god's cheques XD


and you know what? the world need more of your kind of egoistic-ness!(sory, not native speaker and this is the first time I read that worl, I know selfish, and I dont wont to look it up..so be it egoistic-ness :D)

You're good at being bad! haha, nah, you're the same as me..I help when it's needed. I dont go through life intending to help, but if someone is needing it, yeah...let me lend you a hand XD it's just a few minutes of my life!
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brigit-aisle Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010
Oh my, we folks are so good :D
really, nice people just make me happy :)
oh and I'm also not a native speaker, just english lessons and dozens of hour of animes (for nerds ;P) xD
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010
yees! god bless anime and manga XD haha, the best are the english-dub anime XD

oh, today I helped two birds which were trying to eat the left-overs of a cookie inside it's packet. I went and emptied the packet in the side of the street and so the little birdies were able to eat it XD I'm such a good girl XD
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brigit-aisle Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010
shit dude you realloy are D:
somehow I feel like I should do somthing nice now too *looks out for people who need halp*
today I bought a birthday present for my sister, does that count :B ?
xD

You know there should be something like points for stuff like this.
A motivation for doing nice things.
Like I give you a cookie will you give me a point?????
...but maybe a good doing just loses it's meaning through that ^^'
though at the other hand if somebody who normally wouldn't move a finger is then willing to be helpful it also would be kind of a success
*shrugg*
OH WELL I DON'T KNOW ;)
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010
Whoa, thanks! ;D

haha, I dont know. Let me think, it counts if you arent expecting an even better gift for your birthday?

Hey, I think that the reward is me feeling good with mysel (yeah, as if). Honestly, it's like an insurance, just in case there's really a god...like "hey pal, I didnt go to church, but look at all I did! I even helped too small birdies!"
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brigit-aisle Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
hm... sometime ago I came to the conclusion:
no. I don't believe in a god.
The thing I believe in are people and something called good will.
I don't believe in god, I believe in people.
lol now that I write it sounds kinf of naiv to me xD

Mind if I ask you one thing?
Why are you insure about god and stuff, because it kind of sounds a bit like the afterlife-issue ^^
You don't have to answer that, I would just be interested :>
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
haha. I gave up trying to find out if there's a god or not. I believe there's not a god like the church says, all the time watching over us, listening to our prayers and helping the one who deserves it (because that would be so boring! like watching ants!). Sooo, I care not if there's a god/powerful being, or if he helps at random. I just live on, not giving too much thought to it..as it doesnt affect my everyday life XD Besides, how could I be able to prove his existence? haha. [link]


Oh, and I dont mind if you ask...we're talking, after all....well, I mostly answered your question with the above paragraph, right? And why? I dont know...I just dont like what religion says...I dont like all the idea they propose of hell and heaven..I hate the idea of being punished for eternity for the mistakes of one life and I dont like the idea of heaven because I value souls a lot (they are the most useful thing evar!) and them spending eternity in heaven doing nothing sounds just completely stupid.

Basically, I made up a more beautiful version of reality and after life 'cause all in all I'm afraid of death XD

I dont know if that answered your question....if not, ask again ;D
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Fox--Kit Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010
Heh, personally, the way I like to see it, people like you show that God lives with us in the world. Kindness and love are proof that God exists. =3
And I find that most often-then-not, it's only certain churches who do this kind of thing. They're just the ones that get all the attention. That's because the others are actually out there doing things. One bad example does not represent the whole. Everyone has different opinions of what they think is the most important. =3
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2010
haha, that's what you rescue from my text?! haha, nah, kidding XD So I'm like a tinny god to you?


oh, I didnt know that of the churches..yes, they always say that a bad employee makes the whole place look bad XD
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Fox--Kit Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010
Um, no, sorry. I guess you misunderstood. ^^' I meant that, the fact that people perform random acts of kindess is proof that God exists.

*nods* Very true.
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2010
haha, no, I understood form the beggining...I was just being not humble, just oulling your leg XD

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Fox--Kit Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2010
X3 Fair enough.
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link1112 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^ that was so nice from u!
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
THANKS!
haha, I'm such a good girl XD and I even scratch my fingernails agains the asphalt picking up his pamphlets! haha.
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link1112 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha
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Biizam Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
Story of my life.
I'm not against religions themselves, I'm against people who assume too much about what their religions say.
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
SAME HERE!
I respect what they think, yet I found many things stupid! I'm not going to preach about wasting time locked up in the church, cause, hey, I'm here with the computer! But if you're going to go around talking about doing the good, try doing the good ;D
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Biizam Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
Agreed :]
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
so glad to hear that ;D THANK YOU!
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MusicAgainstTheHeart Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
Oh, this is great!
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
Thank you so very much! I'm very glad you liked it ;D
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kmbrother Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010  Student Writer
Even a three word poem can be so beatiful.
I have a feeling there's a theme to this prose.
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
thanks!
Though I didnt got the second sentence?
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DJNERD Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
I like this, cause in a way, you are doing what God wants, and the woman in the church was not. Irony.
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
yeah! I'm earning his love XD haha. I like the way you resumed it ;D and I'm glad you liked ti :D

btw, wasnt your picture blue before?
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DJNERD Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
I do. :)

No, it was Sapphire. :XD: I know what you meant, I change it every now and then, because I got several colors to try out to see which one I like best. Thank you for noticing. :)
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
haha, sory for not knowing the difference betwen sapphire and blue XD haha..once someone said that animals and fruit dont count as colours XD And yeah! as hell I noticed! like we would talk almost everyday! It's almost like remembering the face of someone!
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DJNERD Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
Well sapphire is a gemstone, does that count as a color? Eliska says it does, cause gemstones are pretty.

Well then think of it in the same terms as changing my hair and face make up. :lol:
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
but she's a girl! girs have so many many colors! they have several names for the very same color!

haha, erm, do you use make up? haha...because I'm a girl and I dont ;D

ok, so here it's 12.15, I have to wake up in 7 hours and I usually need 9 to 11 hours of sleep.....so I'm leaving, I'll read your answer defending your woman tomorrom, after my english classes XD haha. see ya and dont let the bed bugs bite you ;D
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DJNERD Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
Sorry it took so long to reply, my internet went out. :(

SO! She's being creative, you're a writer, you get that right?

Red, blue, yellow, white.
Ruby, Sapphire, Topaz, Diamond. Which would you prefer? You don't always just use the basics to describe everything do you? I mean the above example just gave you 8 options instead of only 4, double the color options! I mean your avatar says you love color, why not have more of them?

Eliska asked if you're a girl, then why don't you have many different color names? Every "good girl" has at least three names for the same color.(Okay, so you may have something with you original statment, but Eliska gives me love so I have to agree with her.)

I'm an actor, I wear stage make up when I am acting, but not for everyday use.


You know, bed bugs are bad this year, cause the morons in our lovely Congress just outlawed the poison we as Americans use to kill them and control their populations. Little buggy bastards suck!

ANYWAY! Have fun at English class! :)
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010
haha, so it's good I didnt stayed waiting for your response XD

haha, I prefer colors like "canary-yellow" or "rose-red". The kind that dont require of me to know different colors. That way I know (let's say) six and yet I can express it exactly XD yeah, it's almost like cheating XD

I understand why you would defend Eliska instead of defending me XD haha, well, I consider myself in the middle, I have days when I love to act as a girl, with dresses, tights and all.....and days when I just cant stand girly actitudes XD and because what I consider yellow is red to the rest of the world....so I basically dont like learning colors that I cant identify correctly. Did that make sanse? and well, because of what I wrote in the paragraph before ;D

Oh my! really? you're an actor?! of what type of plays? oh tell me!

really? I didnt know that? A friend of mine once told me that expression, I found it disgusting, but I cant help repeating it ;D Whoa, this was one of the most interesting messages I've read, because of all the things! you being an actor, and the bedbugs..and all XD

yeah, it was great, I really love those classes ;D
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SaraV-Art Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
O.O
*has no words to describe the perfection of this*
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
oh, thank you so much dear! I'm very glad you liked it to that extend ;D
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SaraV-Art Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
it says what I have tried to say my whole life :XD:
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
really? whoa, that's great! and I was a bit scare of getting critics because this was such a critic against church XD and praying
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SaraV-Art Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
I bet there's a lot of people out there that would also love this.
I always wondered "if you preach helping others, why do you ask God to do it for you?" and questions like that :XD:
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florchys103 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010
so totally true!
dont lock yourself days after days trying to get the purification and all that crap, go out and help when you can! do something of your life! That's what I hate of the church!
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SaraV-Art Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
:nod:
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