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I helped an elder while you were asking for miracles.
I was someone's happiness when you were praying.
Tell God that next time you talk with Him.
I was someone's happiness when you were praying.
Tell God that next time you talk with Him.
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No Longer Anonymous
No longer can I remain anonymous, just another girl checking in for her doctor's appointment. The moment I tell them the visit is to be billed to the state, and present this voucher, which might as well be painted in bright red blood, dripping and leaving a breadcrumb trail for all, with a neon sign that reads "sexual assault," I become that girl.
I see the way their eyes change. I see how they look at me. The hardness of the day, painted in the lines on their face, softens, just a bit. Their eyes, normally cold and focused, now try to melt my heart with their temporary concern.
I sit in the waiti
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i call this a heptahedron.
i'm nothing but a washed up cliché
with pages of poetry locked behind my eyes
and forced under my damaged fingernails.
skin is my canvas, an empty slate,
and i'm painting stars in colors that do not have
names; colors that only exist in my mind.
every day is a wait for 11:11 and the opportunity
to discuss my darkest secrets with four-leaved clovers
and moving lights in the night sky.
i'm dancing on the tips of my toes
to avoid stepping on cracks in the pavement
and killing a family of ants.
i spend afternoons making up religions
and teaching them to my stuffed animals
just so i can f
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As I watch
As I watch the Falling stars,
I think of your starlight eyes.
So full of happiness; the
taint of the world unknown to them.
As I watch the falling stars,
I think of your downy soft, curly hair.
So perfect in that it never seems to undo,
Always staying in perfect harmony.
As I watch the falling stars,
I think of your perfect little nose.
Perfectly straight, and upturned at the tip.
A pretty, light pink.
As I watch the Falling stars,
I wonder how you seem to be just for me.
You love my laugh, you love my smile.
But what you don't know is that I love you the most.
As I watch the Falling stars,
I think of my sweet angel and her
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Today was a windy day. When I was exiting my university, I saw this old man (whose bike was on a side of the street) desperatedly picking up some (like 50 o 70) pamphlets which were all spread over the floor. And the wind! So I went and helped him. Then other two people came to help him too. and he was so grateful! he wished me luck with my studies and all. and he explained several times that the papers fell from the basket in his bike because of a rock in the way.
Well, we finished picking everthing, I wished a good day to the man, he too (plus luck in the sutdies) and left. Oh, the pamphlets were about a centre for abandoned pets. So the guy was a good guy! So well, we parted ways. Me felling so good for having helped.
I walked half a block and crossed a church where I saw this woman praying....and I thought, "ha, you were there, secluded and all, and I was out here, living my life and helping a good guy". so well, this's been in my mind for a time....so here is the result....tell your god I said hi
EDIT: I'm so very glad so many people liked this one ;D I was a bit afraid as this has some religious stuff....but well, very happy this got popular, so thank you to everyone ;D
Well, we finished picking everthing, I wished a good day to the man, he too (plus luck in the sutdies) and left. Oh, the pamphlets were about a centre for abandoned pets. So the guy was a good guy! So well, we parted ways. Me felling so good for having helped.
I walked half a block and crossed a church where I saw this woman praying....and I thought, "ha, you were there, secluded and all, and I was out here, living my life and helping a good guy". so well, this's been in my mind for a time....so here is the result....tell your god I said hi
EDIT: I'm so very glad so many people liked this one ;D I was a bit afraid as this has some religious stuff....but well, very happy this got popular, so thank you to everyone ;D
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It's great that you got to help someone.
But you have no right to judge that women, you don't know what she was praying for. For all you know someone she really loves could be dying, she or her spouse may have lost their jobs or were maybe going through a divorce, she could have lost a child or anyone she held dear. There are a thousand other things that she could have been going through. Or maybe she wasn't even going through anything herself, maybe she was praying for someone else. Either way you shouldn't assume that she never helps anyone and just sits around praying all day. My intention is not to be a trouble maker or cause any dissruhmptment. But I can't help but see the immaturity of this whole thing. If you only helped the man to brag and put yourself higher then an innocent women that you know nothing about, it's just the same as just passing by him. It's like doing a good thing for a bed reason. It makes me sad to see pie ole filled with such big egos walking around pointing out who is doing something good in there lives and who isn't. Again I'm very sorry if this angers you, but I can't just read this and not defend that lady. And it's one thing to walk by, see her, and have the thought of it. And it's another to waste your time and post it somewhere. You should try to see things through other people's eyes. You can't go through life thinking that your perspective is the only one that matters. I somewhat see your point in going out and doing something other then sitting around and praying all day, but I guarantee that she does more then just pray. Christians are called to be the hands and feet of God. Yes some of them just sit around and think that God will take care of everything. But the Bible specifically says that they have to do their part too. Yes they should pray and they do, but they also need to show Gods love to the world around them. Some of them don't but a lot of them do. Thinking all Christians are the same is like saying all cops sit around eating donuts with their thumbs up their butts. Or saying that all blacks hate whites or all whites hate blacks. I have many friends from that are black and white and I love all of them the same. I have friends and family that are Christians while some aren't, I still love all of them. My point is people are people, no matter where they come from, what they look like, or what they believe. You can have people who are terrible but 'claim' to know God, and you can have wonderful people that know him. You can have great people that don't and horrible ones that don't. All I'm trying to say is please don't look at something from the outside and think you know it all, because with all do respect its a stupid way to live. I'm not calling you stupid I'm just trying to get my point across and the only way I can seem to do that is to say it bluntly. Also she wouldn't have to tell Him that you helped someone and she didn't, He already knows.
But you have no right to judge that women, you don't know what she was praying for. For all you know someone she really loves could be dying, she or her spouse may have lost their jobs or were maybe going through a divorce, she could have lost a child or anyone she held dear. There are a thousand other things that she could have been going through. Or maybe she wasn't even going through anything herself, maybe she was praying for someone else. Either way you shouldn't assume that she never helps anyone and just sits around praying all day. My intention is not to be a trouble maker or cause any dissruhmptment. But I can't help but see the immaturity of this whole thing. If you only helped the man to brag and put yourself higher then an innocent women that you know nothing about, it's just the same as just passing by him. It's like doing a good thing for a bed reason. It makes me sad to see pie ole filled with such big egos walking around pointing out who is doing something good in there lives and who isn't. Again I'm very sorry if this angers you, but I can't just read this and not defend that lady. And it's one thing to walk by, see her, and have the thought of it. And it's another to waste your time and post it somewhere. You should try to see things through other people's eyes. You can't go through life thinking that your perspective is the only one that matters. I somewhat see your point in going out and doing something other then sitting around and praying all day, but I guarantee that she does more then just pray. Christians are called to be the hands and feet of God. Yes some of them just sit around and think that God will take care of everything. But the Bible specifically says that they have to do their part too. Yes they should pray and they do, but they also need to show Gods love to the world around them. Some of them don't but a lot of them do. Thinking all Christians are the same is like saying all cops sit around eating donuts with their thumbs up their butts. Or saying that all blacks hate whites or all whites hate blacks. I have many friends from that are black and white and I love all of them the same. I have friends and family that are Christians while some aren't, I still love all of them. My point is people are people, no matter where they come from, what they look like, or what they believe. You can have people who are terrible but 'claim' to know God, and you can have wonderful people that know him. You can have great people that don't and horrible ones that don't. All I'm trying to say is please don't look at something from the outside and think you know it all, because with all do respect its a stupid way to live. I'm not calling you stupid I'm just trying to get my point across and the only way I can seem to do that is to say it bluntly. Also she wouldn't have to tell Him that you helped someone and she didn't, He already knows.